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Sacha got feelings for brooke chapter1

Sacha pov

So guess i just got in for corrie be Ben Thompson girlfriend you plays Ryan and I going to play Sian but I really want to play a lesbian in the show but when I was six or seven really fancied Brooke Vincent you leave me to go in a soap and we lost contract and now I am 17 year old and I am about to find out you plays Sophie Webster in corrie because the boss just told me that going to play her girlfriend in 2010.

So the person is playing Sophie Webster is late because phil just told me that she on the way in her mum car and I am so scary of find out who is this and she come to the green room now and she is burette and the person is about to open the door.

Brooke pov

So guess they find someone to play Sian you going to be my girlfriend and I want to know who it this but I am so scary to find out and total miss Sacha you was my best mate in drama school and we lost contract because I join corrie and wish I can meet her again but I can't because don't know where she is.

So my mum take me to work and we are at my work now and start to walk to the green room because the person you plays Sian is in there with phil the boss of corrie and I am opening the door and noice it blonde hair girl and good one phil to get fit blonde for me.

Both pov

So she just about to walk in the green room deep breath Sacha might like her but she never be Brooke Vincent and the brunette look up and noice is was Sacha and srceam and then Sacha start to scream to and phil was guess. Why they was scream and both Sacha and Brooke ran at each other and hug each other and they was so happy to see each other and Sacha feelings for Brooke was rush back to her and Sacha and Brooke both said can't believe it you and Sacha was happy to have brooke in her life again and so was Brooke...

Tell me wat you think
Might be crapxx

Comments

( 9 comments — Leave a comment )
abs5721
Apr. 9th, 2011 05:36 am (UTC)
I like it alot!
i_love_sophian
Apr. 9th, 2011 07:05 am (UTC)
This is gonna be a good one. I like the brooke meets sacha ones, don't get many xxx
sophiesianfan1
Apr. 9th, 2011 09:57 am (UTC)
Chapter 2 up nowxxx
willow59
Apr. 9th, 2011 07:42 am (UTC)
Liking the sound of this please continue with it!! :) xx
sophiesianfan1
Apr. 9th, 2011 09:55 am (UTC)
Chapter 2 up nowxx
chels5599
Apr. 9th, 2011 09:07 am (UTC)
i find it weird tht all of a sudden brooke just thinks aww o really miss sasha from school when she was 3...to be honnest she qouldnt remembrr...
and my opinion...umm i think you should look at it again
cuz i read ur writting before n ur good but this semms rushed :) x
sophiesianfan1
Apr. 9th, 2011 09:55 am (UTC)
So did have time to do right because I had work and came back put chapter 2 and thank you to let me knows x
sophie_sian_fan
Apr. 9th, 2011 10:25 am (UTC)
this is good, but the english isnt that good, bits like "So guess i just got in for corrie be Ben Thompson girlfriend you plays Ryan" its actually:
"So guess what i just got in to corrie to be Ben Thompson's girlfriend who plays Ryan"

sorry it is good just thought i should say :) x
rebeccah19
Apr. 30th, 2011 01:00 am (UTC)
wow that was amazing !!! i can wait to see what happened !!! can't wait to read the next chapter!! plz update asap:)
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